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Sunday, February 14, 2016

Similitude

           The rage of years welled up in me then, finally bursting forth in an instant when flesh touched iron, when my finger pulled the trigger sending the ball forth with deadly speed and uncanny aim for these hefty models. Then I felt it, the rage lingering even though I had fired upon my enemy; those I had been trained to kill since I volunteered, and trained to hate earlier than that.
            I don’t know what I thought would have happened, but I was surprised to find my rage was not immediately appeased upon firing the gun, upon shooting the enemy. I had seen the shot strike one of the enemy troops and so I followed to confirm my kill, only to create doubt in my mind. My anger did not wane with every step toward him, nor as I stood over him while he gasped his last breaths.
            I had thought that somehow this war was going to end the hate, but it had finally struck me now, all too late, how wrong I had been. Here I was watching a man die his last breaths thanks my hate-fueled gunshot, and yet my hate had not been satisfied.
            Here was a man just as I, built of flesh and bone, muscle and blood, skin and hair. In his life he hungered as I do, required sleep and warmth and shelter. I looked on him and saw his clothing, saw how much it was like my own, or would be had I not been wearing my uniform. I saw his eyes in my own, he breathed as I do only shallower, the life slowly leaving him. He could smell the heat and smoke around us just as I could, hear the distant shots and shouts around us. He as well could taste – now he tasted his own blood, and I fought back the strange thought that if I should taste it, it would be as much red iron liquid as my own.
            Here before me was another human being whose heart beat as mine, though more and more faint just as his lungs also pumped as mine do. But then it happened and I looked down at the man, and realized how different we truly were. Not that he was now dead and I was not, not that he was a civilian and I was not – no, I would die one day as well and I was a civilian too, not long ago. No those did not serve to separate us.
            It was when I killed him, out of hate, did he remain a man and I was no longer.

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